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This is still a work in progress. I was thinkin this would be like a basement lab where they were building the machine. I might leave this for now and try another idea I had where NASA was building one in a big hangar.
posted by Mark Dorn at 10:56 PM
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Alright mark, so i dont' have much time so i'm gonna be blunt. Perspective feels a bit wonky. It's off a little bit everywhere, and i'm not talkin a lot, just a bit, but it's everywhere so it's makin it feel less solid than it should. i'd say redraw it free hand and hammer the ish out of it and then use this same painting, same kick ass lighting ( I REALLY LIKE THE LIGHTING) and it should look freaken Solid baby. There are some shadows that may need to be added here and there, but i think it'd be easier to meet in person to go over those things. Lemme know when you got time. Oh and thank for the feed back on my stuff man, preciate it :)
Tkae care.
Hey thanks for the feedback man. Yeah I should've really got the perspective solid before jumping into the painting. As far as meeting up are you workin right now? I can meet Sat afternoon or anytime Sunday. Maybe others workin on this can meet up too. Lemme know what the deally.
Hey mark if you can we can meet up at my place tomorrow, Sunday the 20th for like an hour or so after 7 pm and just go over some stuff and maybe talk bout it more. Lemme know. I got work till 7pm at swatch. My number is (925 726 1516
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